the first character is really poorly written. Each chinese character should fit inside a square. But the first character is about twice as wide as it is tall.
Ditto on the first character: the two halves are too far apart. The radical on the left is too compressed, and the third stroke is too short. The first and second strokes on the right hand side are not quite right, and the fourth and fifth strokes are too big. But the second character is a bit off too: the last stroke is supposed to be attached.
i like it but i dnt know what it says though...i want 2 get either my name or the woed elegance in chinese either in my lower back or in my right hip...