the line work is very shaky. that being said, this is a great idea for a tatt, it just needs a bit more shading, and a steadier hand to make it really pop. A bit more work, and this could be an amazing piece.
wow finally a tattoo in okie dokie to be proud of looks great.not all your shit is just shit. i wonder how many people you gave desieses to? keep scratchin in O.K.